Describe how a friend changed you life in a story(DESCRIPTIVE essayXD)

A friend is a person who will stretch out their hand to help us when we fall.A friend will not mock or disdain us whenever we fail.Indeed,friends are people nobody can do without.Of course,I have a good,loyal friend too.She was the one who changed me much and instilled me with a sense of responsibility with her righteous and kind of character.
I once isolated myself from rest of the world after terrifying accident which killed my parents in front of my eyes.After the traumatic ordeal,I was forced to be sent to an orphanage as no relatives wanted to take me in because my parents were not rich and had no assets to leave me.Once i thought i could start a new life at this place.But everything was a nightmare once again as there a group of older boys who took an instant dislike to me and planned to make life miserable for me.The other orphans kept away from me to avoid trouble.
Just when i was suffering from a great depression,,Jolin,a caring angel,come to me.She was one of the orphans too.But she was one of the few who did not bully or look down to me.Nor did she alienate me.Everytime,whenever there were games or activities held by the guardian,she would always join me,or partner me so that I could be part of the orphanage.Instead of feeling being isolated and neglected,I was slowly healed by her kindness.
Jolin had always given me much comfort.She would always be at my side when I was sad.I remembered there was a day where all the orphans accused me for breaking a vase.Again,Jolin was the one who proved to the guardian that it was not my fault.Eventually,both of us developed a special bond.Jolin was a very popular girl in the orphanage.She was the apple of the guardians.Other orphans admired her.Because of her friendship with me,I was slowly accepted.
The time passes swiftly as I concentrated fully on my studies.I overcame every huddle academically with ease and finally I obtained a scholarship for tertiary education.I knew that i had to make something of myself through education.
After a few years of sweat,toil and tears overseas.I am niow an engineer.Most people say that friendship is the foundation of love,and love is the friendship that catches fire.Jolin is now my lovely wife who had bare me three lovely children.I have become a successful and tough man who is ready to shoulder the responsibility of looking after my three sons and face the society which is full of challenges and hardship.And all there I have my wife,Jolin,to Thank You.